Saturday, January 24, 2015

Picture Book Draft


            In the land of New Zealand, the mountains are high and the forests are low. There are beaches, hills, plains, and of course volcanic plateaus. But what we really look for are the subtropical forests, where the baby kiwi bird lives in his great bush. Now this kiwi was different from the others. Oh yes, the kiwi was very different from the others. Instead of playing hide and seek with his friends, no the baby kiwi dreamt and dreamt. Now this kiwi had many dreams, but not enough to satisfy it seems. But there is one dream he always had. The dream was to fly and that’s was not bad. He went to his father to tell him the dream, so went off to see his father who was drinking from a stream. “Oh Father, Oh Father!” the baby kiwi cried, “I want to fly, I want to fly!” the kiwi smiled wide. Now the father looked at him with a sigh, and told him he would never be able to fly. Baby kiwi became sad, but that wasn’t too bad. The baby kiwi wanted a better answer, so he went to the wise Tuatara, who was once a dancer. “Oh Tuatara, Oh Tuatara,” the kiwi cried, “I want to fly, I want to fly,” the kiwi smiled wide. Now the wise Tuatara became very serious, but the kiwi knew he was never mysterious. “I tell you, I tell you,” the Tuatara said. “Little kiwi, without wings how can you fly?” and the lizard went to bed. This gave kiwi an idea, he went back home passing a tortilla. “I will fly,” the kiwi said, “I will create a machine that will let me go high.” The kiwi went home to get some supplies, and he vowed to never tell himself lies. The kiwi created a machine to help him fly, but as it turns out, the machine did not make him go high. The kiwi tried again updating his machine that will make him fly, and this time the machine mad him go high. Passing his father and his friend, he knew that imagining will never lead him to a dead end. The kiwi flew farther with his machine, passing the wise lizard and above the grass which was green.

Tuesday, January 20, 2015

Authors Note/Forward

People don’t believe in themselves. They get this great idea, and then think that people are going to put them down because of this idea. I personally think it’s wrong that people don’t have faith in themselves. When I was younger, all my ideas were destroyed by my older brother. He wanted to show that he was the greater one, the one with the better imagination, the one with bigger dreams. One of my dreams, and it is still my dream today, is to become an actor. When I told my brother this with pride, he automatically said I would not be able to. But it wasn’t only my brother who put me down. When I was in elementary school, I wanted to be top of the class. I studied hard and long with the help of my father, but a classmate always tried to make me give up. He didn’t want me to be better and smarter than him. Eventually I became the smartest in the class, completing my dream. Most people give up after so many fails. That is not good, if you are determined to do something good, do it no matter what. People should be able to give up so easily because of a few fails. Believing in yourself is all about being sure that you can do anything, even if people are against you. Usually, when you decide to take a big challenge or to do something that people failed to do you will find that everyone is putting you down. This should give you motivation to complete the task. But this will never happen if you let others, or yourself, put you down. 

Tuesday, January 6, 2015

Critical Thinking Question: How does this text deal with individuals and groups? Are people acting alone and in competition with others, or does this text imagine people working together?

Title: READY PLAYER ONE
Author: Ernest Cline


Quotation


Elaboration

1. “I loathed the Sixers and was disgusted by their very existence.” (pg. 34)




2. “Solos like me, didn’t care much for the clans,” (pg. 34)




3. “You should join the Sux0rs, they can use you vast stores of knowledge.” (pg. 44)





4. “I wanted to travel incognito.”


1. I believe the Sixers is a stupid organization and is a waste of time if you are applying to it. Joining a group that searches for Halliday’s Easter Egg sounds like a good idea, but when you find the egg, you have to share the prize with everyone in the group.

2. In my opinion, the hunt for the egg is best done solo. Being alone means not sharing information with anybody from family to foe. If you share information with someone, you will probably be stabbed in the back.

3. The Sux0rs is a nickname given to the Sixers because mostly everyone disagreed with their idea of a gunter clan. Telling a kid that they belong to a group of so called losers pretty much explains that the Sixers/Sux0rs is a disgrace to the gaming world.

4. This can show the concern of Wade and how he wants to stay solo. If someone started to follow him and find the tomb he was looking for, then he could easily be defeated and lose finding the copper key. Even though the game world is no player vs player, the tomb can be a pvp location and Wade would be defeated horrifically.


Claim: Even though working in a group can complete a task faster, there are some scenarios where you should be alone.